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Title: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Kman96 on December 23, 2012, 03:48:38 PM
Hi guys.

This probably isn't a good idea for me to start another project, but this is my attempt at finishing old stories that I've started over the past few years, but never finished.  I've had great ideas for all of them, but I've always ran out of time to finish them. So, to resolve that, I'm bringing them to NSM to gain inspiration.

The ones I have going currently are:

Caleb, the Hero a prequel to The Wind Waker
Prologue: The Beginning of Peace (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5153.msg183863#msg183863)
Chapter 1: A Mysterious Musician (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5153.msg183926#msg183926)
Chapter 2: The Baton (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5153.msg322638#msg322638)
Chapter 3: Hyrule Castle (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5153.msg322639#msg322639)
Chapter 4: Homecoming (Incomplete) (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5153.msg322640#msg322640)
*BONUS* Caleb the Hero Family Tree (Scanned) (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5153.msg322675#msg322675)

Luigi's Mansion (2): King Boo's Revenge
Prologue (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5155.msg183944#msg183944)
Chapter 1 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5155.msg297214#msg297214)
Chapter 2 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5155.msg297218#msg297218)
Chapter 3 (Incomplete) (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5155.msg299714#msg299714)
*BONUS* Concept Art (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5155.msg299716#msg299716)

HeartGold SoulSilver Fanfic
Foreword (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7990.msg322772#msg322772)
The Story (Incomplete) (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7990.msg322775#msg322775)

Pokémon: Mystery of the Ghost World
a Combination of Pokémon Mystery Dungeon and Pokémon Ranger

Ranger's View:
Chapter 1: Trouble in the Forest
Pokémon's View:
Chapter 2: The Mansion Guild
Chapter 3: A Clueless Case
Ranger's View:
Chapter 4: The Rampardos Ring
Chapter 5: A Visit to Cinnabar
Pokémon's View:
Chapter 6: A Meeting with Heatran
Chapter 7: Figuring it Out
Ranger's View
Chapter 8: A Cry for Help

Paper Mario: The Curse of the AntiGuy
Prologue
Chapter One: Toad Town in Trouble
Chapter Two: A Rugged Fate
Chapter Three: A Path of Stars and Island of Presumed Desolation
Chapter Four: Destiny Punch
Chapter Five: Who Let the Boos Out?
Chapter Six: General Guy's Chapter
Chapter Seven: A Dark Way Back (Unfinished)

Frogger's Pointless Adventures!
Foreword (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7342.msg299853#msg299853)
Book 1: The Magic Ring (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7342.msg299854#msg299854)
Book 2: The Mystic Egg of Firefly Swamp (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7342.msg301739#msg301739)
Book 3: The Beast of Lake Moon (Incomplete) (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7342.msg301743#msg301743)
*BONUS* Series Planning List (Scanned) (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7342.msg322676#msg322676)

MAJORA'S MASK 2
Foreword (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7343.msg299859#msg299859)
The Story (Technically Incomplete, but I was at a stopping point in my tale, so eh whatever)
 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7343.msg299861#msg299861)

--Links will be added as I type them up from what I have written.

*NOTE*
Please do not post in any aforementioned Threads- Please post any questions and comments right here on this Hub thread.
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction!
Post by: K-NiGhT on December 23, 2012, 03:55:37 PM
yay
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction!
Post by: Kman96 on July 10, 2015, 10:58:19 PM
Just in case anybody is curious...I have reached an extreme level of boredom, and upon discovering these old stories in my bedroom, I've decided to continue typing them up!

Starting with Luigi's Mansion 2, I'll be slowly typing up what I have written of the stories I have listed (and possibly adding more old ones that I have rediscovered).

NOTE: I am not adding to these stories at all. What you see listed in the OP is all I have for those stories. These fan fictions are UNfinished, which is why I am sharing them. I have no plans to complete them at the moment. Also, I wrote most of them in middle school, FYI. If I'm doing anything, I have embellished some of my bad sentence structure, adjectives, etc. Everything is still pretty much the same, tho.

Hope you enjoy!
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction!
Post by: Kman96 on July 28, 2015, 07:38:00 PM
I have finally finished typing up all that I've written of Luigi's Mansion 2! I even included some old drawings that were relevant to the development of the story. Please enjoy what is there, and I hope to be moving on to another one of these stories soon!
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction!
Post by: mikey on July 28, 2015, 08:19:20 PM
Quote from: K-NiGhT on December 23, 2012, 03:55:37 PMyay
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction!
Post by: Kman96 on July 29, 2015, 10:34:26 PM
*Another Update!*

After not a long time of searching, I located what I have completed of my Paper Mario story, and I put the chapters in on that, and I also discovered a couple volumes from a Frogger Series that I wanted to start writing as well...I have the first book typed up, but not the second.

Oh my...I just got a brilliant idea to post a story I wrote and abandoned almost 9 years ago...if I can find a typed version of what I had of that story, I'll post that soon, as well.

Big, big, UNFINISHED things to come!


EDIT: I have posted the first book of the Frogger series, as well as my (personally) infamous story, Majora's Mask 2. I've also begun to write Forewords for the stories I'm posting in, giving a bit of background information about each story, anecdotes, etc. Read them. They're "fun."
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: EFitTrainr on September 01, 2015, 11:40:50 PM
Oh my god.

HELLA NOSTALGIA.


Just one question...

Who is Tristan?
Was his brain REALLY that small????
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Kman96 on January 03, 2016, 11:25:04 PM
Kman here again - I just wanted to drop in after laying down some serious updates -

Caleb, the Hero (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=5153.msg183863#msg183863) is now (in)complete! And, I must say, that after reading everything while typing it up, it truly is a godawful story. My apologies. Cool idea, sure, but terrible terrible execution. It seems as though I stuck STRICTLY to any and all information provided by games alone and opted out of using my own creative intellect to fill in the blanks. I can liken it to an attempt to put several incorrect puzzle pieces in the place of the correct ones, eventually damaging the puzzle itself just to try to make them fit. Yipes...Like I said, everyone has to start somewhere, right? Maybe 7th grade wasn't the best place.

Additionally, I have added Scanned pages to both Caleb, the Hero, as well as Frogger's Pointless Adventures. These scans provide some interesting insight as to my plans for each story and where I might have taken the characters should I have continued writing.

I hope you enjoy these updates - I expect to get much more done in the coming days!

EDIT: I have finished typing up my HeartGold/SoulSilver fanfiction (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7990.msg322772#msg322772) and added it to the mix! Enjoy :)
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: mikey on January 04, 2016, 09:13:15 PM
Sorry for posting in that thread!  I didn't see the "DO NOT POST IN THIS THREAD" and got terribly confused!
Anyway, I just wanted to say I loved the idea of a pre-flooded wind waker and how you incorporated some of the locations from the game into a pre-flooded world.
That being said, I believe it's just about...
REBOOT TIIIIIIIME
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Kman96 on January 04, 2016, 09:17:46 PM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on January 04, 2016, 09:13:15 PMSorry for posting in that thread!  I didn't see the "DO NOT POST IN THIS THREAD" and got terribly confused!
Anyway, I just wanted to say I loved the idea of a pre-flooded wind waker and how you incorporated some of the locations from the game into a pre-flooded world.
That being said, I believe it's just about...
REBOOT TIIIIIIIME
Nah, you're good, I didn't include a DO NOT POST in the OP, so that's my mistake, not yours. If I had that kind of power, I'd lock my story threads, but for now I'm doing my best to direct all conversation to this thread.

I have to agree with you on the concept of a pre-flooded Hyrule. I really wish they would release some kind of story from that time. When I began writing this I was in 7th grade and I was very proud of the angle I was taking it, but as I was typing it up yesterday I noticed how very uncreative I was and how much I was limiting myself which was, in effect, limiting the story's capabilities. As for a reboot, however, I can't say that I'd be up to the challenge. Once I go down a road, it's hard for me to back out and then go down it a different way. I'm afraid I'd make something too close to the original, just...different and shinier.
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: mikey on January 04, 2016, 09:35:44 PM
Think of all the souls that would be brought peace from a Caleb the Hero reboot
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Kman96 on January 04, 2016, 09:36:49 PM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on January 04, 2016, 09:35:44 PMThink of all the souls that would be brought peace from a Caleb the Hero reboot
...You mean like all the ones that died in the flood? ;)
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: mikey on January 04, 2016, 09:39:51 PM
Quote from: Kman96 on January 04, 2016, 09:36:49 PM...You mean like all the ones that died in the flood? ;)
exactly what I meant
do it pleeeeez
with a hot fudge sundae on top
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Kman96 on January 04, 2016, 09:42:25 PM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on January 04, 2016, 09:39:51 PMexactly what I meant
do it pleeeeez
with a hot fudge sundae on top
I ain't got the time nor the desire, my friend. This thread is where my fanfictions come to die.
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Dudeman on January 04, 2016, 09:43:57 PM
Quote from: Kman96 on January 04, 2016, 09:42:25 PMThis thread is where my fanfictions come to die.
kind of want to keep this to post in threads where any two people are locked in an argument
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: mikey on January 04, 2016, 09:49:08 PM
something I want to point out on MM2: Bombs are pretty much the best item in the game
kinda insulting seeing link take them and saying "save the good stuff for later"
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Kman96 on January 04, 2016, 09:50:39 PM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on January 04, 2016, 09:49:08 PMsomething I want to point out on MM2: Bombs are pretty much the best item in the game
kinda insulting seeing link take them and saying "save the good stuff for later"
I WAS IN SIXTH GRADE AND HAD LITTLE CONCEPT OF LOGIC.
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Oronoco on January 04, 2016, 09:59:54 PM
Quote from: Kman96 on January 04, 2016, 07:54:41 PMI'm actually quite pleased with this story. I'm not quite sure when I started it or how long my writing binge lasted, but if my memory serves me correctly then it must have been a few months following the release of HeartGold and SoulSilver in Spring of 2010, when I was finishing 8th grade.

That spring when Heart Gold/Soul Silver came out was so great. It was really just the best.

I really like reading your stories. If I go back and read through some of what I wrote in Middle School, I kind-of admire some of the humor and spontaneity only my younger self could come up with. (Yours are much more well-written than any of mine were. :)))

Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: EFitTrainr on January 05, 2016, 11:48:36 AM
 "You should go show it to your mom!"

I am the reason that line is there. Woo.
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Kman96 on January 05, 2016, 11:56:52 AM
Quote from: Oronoco on January 04, 2016, 09:59:54 PMThat spring when Heart Gold/Soul Silver came out was so great. It was really just the best.
Yeah, I've got a lot of fond memories from that time in my life. It's very weird to imagine just how long ago it really was!

Quote from: Oronoco on January 04, 2016, 09:59:54 PMI really like reading your stories. If I go back and read through some of what I wrote in Middle School, I kind-of admire some of the humor and spontaneity only my younger self could come up with. (Yours are much more well-written than any of mine were. :)))
Thank you so much! It's a little funny hearing these compliments on things I haven't put effort to in six years, but maybe comments like yours might inspire me to pick up writing again, either on a different subject matter, or maybe more fan fiction (No, Nocturne, I'm not rebooting Caleb the Hero). I suspect it will probably be the latter. My own original content isn't very good. Mostly because I don't have much. Writing fan fiction based on things you like is so much easier!
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: mikey on January 05, 2016, 01:27:29 PM
Quote from: Kman96 on January 05, 2016, 11:56:52 AM(No, Nocturne, I'm not rebooting Caleb the Hero)
Gosh dang
Title: Re: Kman's Unfinished Fan Fiction! (KUFF)
Post by: Oronoco on January 05, 2016, 06:50:09 PM
Quote from: Kman96 on January 05, 2016, 11:56:52 AMThank you so much! It's a little funny hearing these compliments on things I haven't put effort to in six years, but maybe comments like yours might inspire me to pick up writing again, either on a different subject matter, or maybe more fan fiction.

Yeah, sorry if that was a little weird. They made me reminisce, so I was super-excited.

Sometimes I doubt that there's any real value in writing anymore, and then sometimes it can be really rewarding. So I think that if I have the time, it's worth it to enjoy starting a story, even if I never finish it. It's just gotta be beneficial somehow or other.