Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle
Console: Sega Genesis
Title: Castle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Sebastian (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424)
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I approve of the notes, but there's one big issue plaguing this sheet: the spacing.
For example, this measure:
(https://i.imgur.com/wNx0MX7.jpg)
The 8th rest gets less room than the two 16th notes, and it's really disorientating to sight read. I'd recommend rearranging measures to make it fit better. You have a whole second page, why not fill it up the rest of the way? If you want, you can put 3 measures in the first 3 systems and 2 in each after that (and 3 for the last one). It'll screw up the hypermeter and your ossia measures, but it looks a lot better. If you come up with something better, go for it.
Fixed. Thanks for the feedback.
Bump.
Careful - your left margin on page 2 doesn't match that of page 1. I'd increase the size of the one on page 2 to make them the same.
Banking off of what Maelstrom said, have you considered 2-measure systems for some of the piece as he mentioned? Not saying you have to, just if you've tested it out. Right now the first system on page 2 is pretty cramped, though I suppose that might be passable if it's only that one time. But it will get more cramped after you increase the margin.
Fixed.
Splendid!
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot